Recount Writing-Riding the quad

I am learning to make my writing more interesting for my readers.
This is the published copy of my writing

Me and Rawiri were riding on the quad on
Sunday afternoon in the paddock on the farm.  I
t was exciting. We went over the gigantic bumps.

Rawiri said, “Go fast.”  Then we did drifts.
Rawiri was cracking up hard out. 
When we went back up, we watched Login.
It was amazing.