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Friday, June 5, 2020

Recount Writing-On Monday

 On Monday
On Monday afternoon my mum and dad went to get me a gaming chair. I was amazed with my chair. It was cool. 
Me and my dad put all of the parts together. First we got all of the parts. Next we put the screws in. 
After that we set the chair up. Finally I spun around. I was dizzy. I felt cool. My chair is awesome because it can spin fast. It is black and blue.
We were learning about Recount Writing.
I found it easy to tell my readers who was with me for my story.
I found it hard to find exciting words.
I really enjoyed telling about my new chair.
Next time I need to work faster.

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Joeche this is Rawiri I enjoyed the part when you went spinning around on your black and blue chair. In your next story maybe you could use more detail.

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