My Writing sample- Term 1 2021.

Here is my Writing sample for Term 1 2021.

I think my writing has improved because I can use more interesting words to add detail to my writing. 

 At the Rugby club.

On Monday afternoon me and my family went to the rugby clubs in Kaikohe and we were selling cupcakes at the Rugby club. When we were selling the cupcakes for a while I saw Arkillies he was with has papa. First there were people selling some sasuges on the side of us. Next I got some money from my mum and

brought four sasuges for my family and we ate them. My family said that was delicious and they said that was the bomb. Then we stopped and watched the rest of the game. Later on me and my family got some       Joeche